Roya FetovaRoya Fetova

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Roya abruptly turned serious. “That was unprofessional of me—taunting him from the window when he’s stalking us. Now he knows where we are.” She said something sharp in Russian. “We played these cat and mouse games, my Sergey and I. We took risks—enjoyed the game so much.”

Frank didn’t know what to make of the way she flipped from American to Russian or the way her sensuality ran hot and cold. He decided, for the moment, to take her at face value. “He’s gone, Roya. We lost him.”

“No.” Her voice cut. “He steals a car. Boards the train somewhere down the line.” She pinched her lower lip, then smiled and became the blonde American girl again. “The guy’s a ringer for you, except he’s a hunk—sorry, Frank, you’re in good shape but this guy packs more muscle. We need to know his game.”

Frank stared out the window at the lights of the passing industrial landscape and listened to the sound of the train while he went over the horrific events one-by-one. Roya kept calling it a game but this was real life and death. Then with a start, he turned to her. “Speck—Luigi called me Frank Speck. It’s our stalker’s name. When they kidnaped me, they thought they had him.

Roya waved a hand. “Let me think.” She held his gaze and her expression got more and more intense. “I’m still trying out the idea you’re who you say you are. Let’s say you’re for real and this other guy’s Speck. Maybe Speck’s some kind of alias. No, don’t interrupt. Must be big money—a deal gone wrong. Drugs. Guy’s got no field craft or we couldn’t ditch him so easy. He’s not a spook. Not a PI. Only half-good as a tail. Uomo Grasso wanted you so it’s personal with him.”

“Hit man?”

“Yeah, let’s follow that idea. Must be a big contract—I don’t know who but it’s big with front money—lots of money. Say somebody was supposed to get whacked and it didn’t come off. Grasso wants the torpedo and the torpedo wants to disappear. Who was supposed to die? Somebody real big—had to be.” She snapped her fingers. “So Speck set you up like a scapegoat. He needs you dead so he can melt away. The mob doesn’t do post-mortems—they do concrete—so they never find out, never look for him once you’re dead.” She dropped her gaze to the floor.

“What’s the matter? You were on a roll.”

She looked up. “It’s just that things don’t look so good for you, Frank. Problem is, if he can’t get the Mob to kill you, he’ll do it himself.” She glanced out the window. “Next station coming up.”

A sick feeling formed in Frank’s stomach. A man doesn’t like to be hunted and he was hunted by the Mob, the Feds and now this Speck—or whatever his name was. And what about Roya? Wasn’t she using him to get to Grasso? What would she do when she didn’t need him any more?

“Frank, we can’t risk getting off at a local platform. Too sparse. We stand out. We’ll go all the way to Union Station. Crowded this time of day. Just a couple blocks from there to the Ogilvie Metra. We take a train out of the City. My sister Tatiana has a nice place, way out in Crystal Lake. Maybe lay low a few days. Plan our next move.” She nodded. “Okay. Now we need some place to hide till the end of the line. Now where…” She bit her lip again.

* * *

Tony Ferragamo, alias Frank Speck swerved around cars. He clipped a fender and kept going, a blaring horn receding behind him. There was the station. He left the car in the street and ran for the platform.

* * *

Investigation work was often tedious, but solving the puzzle, the twists and turns—that’s what kept Agent Stan Harris going. Back in the Chicago FBI office, he slowly gathered bits and pieces. Then came the usual grind, going through the random data. Then finding a pattern—if he was lucky and after years of experience, Harris knew to trust his gut.

The legal wiretaps on Desi Grasso helped his intuition a lot. His field agents questioned the Joliet hotel clerk and Harris ran through the surveillance footage of the lobby and parking lot. His tech guys enhanced a few grainy shots and he sat reviewing them. There was Tony Ferragamo alias Frank Speck—or was it? He’d been Tony’s handler for a good 18 months and something didn’t click. This guy looked too lean. Why would he use a credit card in the name of Luigi Gastroni—one of Uomo’s favorite lieutenants? Ferragamo was hiding from those people. He studied a shot of the subject getting into a car, a woman behind the wheel. He was almost positive he’d seen her. He’d circulate that picture around the FBI offices. His gut told him he needed to take another look at the truck driver shooting in Missouri.

“Stan, we got something.”

At the interruption, Harris didn’t look up for a few moments, then: “Let’s have it, Paul.”

“Double murder at Joliet Airport.” He dropped a stack of photos on the desk. “It’s Luigi Gastroni and the big guy, one Giovanni Ragliani—they call him Gort—positive ID. Coronor’s on the way and we’re running prints now. And Stan—you gotta see this one for yourself.”

Harris pushed back from his desk and rose to his feet. “Let’s go. And get me the St. Louis Bureau. I’ll talk to them on the way to Joliet.”

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5 responses to “ROYA FETOVA – 11

  1. Lee Jantzen

    Tony’s sister is named Delores (#9). Pick a different name for Roya’s sister. What about Tatiana.

  2. Lee Jantzen

    Stan Harris checked his service revolver, put on his coat and was just about to leave when Agent Dan Mahoney from the organized crime task force stepped in and closed the door. I’m here to discuss your mystery woman. Her name is Roya Fetova. She was one of our best undercover assets until about six months ago. She and her partner Sergey had been bringing in great intel about the Russian mob’s operation here in Chicago and also about its connections in Boston and New York. You might have heard about an ongoing war between the Russians and Grassi’s gang over turf. Unfortunately, Sergey got whacked and Roya is convinced Uomo pulled the trigger himself. Oh by the way, we found out Sergey and Roya were expanding upon the department’s definition of watching your partner’s back. We had to pull Roya in for her own safety and because her professional conduct was being compromised by her hot-headed desire for revenge against Don Grassi. She has been on a leave of absence for the past three months.

    Agent Harris tossed the hotel surveillance photo of Frank Smith on the desk in front of Mahoney. Here is who your rogue agent is hangin’ with these days. Tony Ferragamo! Mahoney exclaimed. No, a Ferragamo look alike. Guys name is Frank Smith and I am trying to figure out what Tony, Smith, and your suspended agent have in common. I am on my way to Joliet to check on a couple of dead mobsters that are somehow connected to this mess. I will check with you when I get back into the office.
    Half way to Joliet Agent Harris received information supplied by the Missouri State Patrol. The driver’s license photo and data for Frank Smith confirmed a definite resemblance between Mr. Smith and Tony Ferragamo. The vitals on the license showed Frank Smith to be a year older, an inch shorter and about ten pounds lighter than Tony. Mr. Smith had been working as an insurance agent and did not have a criminal record. How in the world did this guy end up in a Joliet hotel with a loose-cannon FBI agent? And why is the mob after him? All of sudden it made sense, Grassi’s goons were not after Frank Smith, but Tony Ferragamo—the guy that dared to stand up in court against their boss. It was a case of mistaken identity.

    Stan’s driver said, “Here we are Captain.” The airstrip was sealed off as a crime scene. They drove right up to the plane containing the two dead gangsters. The agent in charge filled him on what they discovered so far. We found gags and duck tape in the back of the plane. It might have nothing to do with this case, but we can probably get some skin samples for DNA. The big guy, Gort, was strangled with a woman’s brassier. Darndest thing I have ever seen. If a woman did it, she must be a strong chick. Both the dead guys had guns, but must have been caught by surprise. This Luigi guy had a pilot’s license and we assume he was flying the plane. However, he was back here. We think someone else landed the plane and we are dusting the interior for prints. Nobody we have talked to saw the plane land.
    Tony was able to get on the train just before the door closed. He could not remember exactly which car Frank and that arrogant blond jumped onto in their little game of trying to fool him. He would just need to walk between cars until he found them.

    The on-board lavatory was small for one person. Roya was forced to sit on Frank’s lap. It was both awkward and uncomfortable. However, it did offer them a place to hide. The PA system finally announced that they had arrived at Union station. Roya told Frank that they should split up for the short walk to the Ogilvie station to catch the next train. Meet me in 10 minutes by the food court.

    Tony got off the train and wondered if he had missed them. There was a sea of people pouring off the train. He hoped he would get lucky and spot his prey. Finally, there was Frank Smith trying to blend into the crowd. Tony made sure not to let him out of his sight. Roya had pulled her hair back in a pony tail. Not much of a disguise, but the best she could do for now. She hung back to see if Frank picked up a tail. Sure enough—there was the guy. She let them go on ahead. For a moment she was tempted to get lost. Frank wasn’t her problem—but he had helped her get a little closer to Uomo Grassi. In the end she decided to play this lead out, and so she followed the two men and tried to decide what to do next.


  3. Apologies to everybody for the delay. Lee has given me everything I need for the next episode. Pressing business is getting in the way.

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